Найти 10 ошибок.One game I am loving is backgammon You are throwing the dice and then you move your...

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Найти 10 ошибок.One game I am loving is backgammon You are throwing the dice and then you move your pieces around the board. It is seeming quite easy, but in fact you are needing to be quite careful. When your piece lands on one of the other person's pieces, you are taking it off the board and you send it back to the beginning You are winning by getting al your pieces to the end and off the board. Some people are preferring chess, but l am not understanding that game. Right now, wait to have a game with my brother. He does his homework. I usually win, so think he doesn't want to play a game with me!

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One game I love is backgammon. You throw the dice and then move your pieces around the board. It seems quite easy, but in fact, you need to be careful. When your piece lands on one of the opponent's pieces, you take it off the board and send it back to the beginning. You win by getting all your pieces to the end and off the board. Some people prefer chess, but I don't understand that game. Right now, I am waiting to play a game with my brother. He is doing his homework. I usually win, so I think he doesn't want to play a game with me!

Errors:

  1. "One game I am loving" should be "One game I love"
  2. "It is seeming" should be "It seems"
  3. "you are needing" should be "you need"
  4. "you are taking it off the board" should be "you take it off the board"
  5. "and you send it back" should be "and send it back"
  6. "you are winning" should be "you win"
  7. "getting al your pieces" should be "getting all your pieces"
  8. "Some people are preferring" should be "Some people prefer"
  9. "but l am not understanding" should be "but I don't understand"
  10. "wait to have a game" should be "waiting to play a game"

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ответил 23 дня назад
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В тексте содержится несколько ошибок, связанных с употреблением времён, структурой предложений и орфографией. Вот расширенный разбор:

  1. "One game I am loving is backgammon"

    • Ошибка: Использование временного континуума с глаголом "love". Глаголы, выражающие чувства и предпочтения, обычно не используются в форме продолженного времени.
    • Исправление: "One game I love is backgammon."
  2. "You are throwing the dice and then you move your pieces around the board."

    • Ошибка: Несогласованность времён в одном предложении.
    • Исправление: "You throw the dice and then you move your pieces around the board."
  3. "It is seeming quite easy"

    • Ошибка: Глагол "seem" также не используется в продолженной форме.
    • Исправление: "It seems quite easy."
  4. "but in fact you are needing to be quite careful."

    • Ошибка: Глагол "need" не используется в продолженной форме.
    • Исправление: "but in fact you need to be quite careful."
  5. "When your piece lands on one of the other person's pieces, you are taking it off the board and you send it back to the beginning"

    • Ошибка: Несогласованность времён и отсутствие знаков препинания.
    • Исправление: "When your piece lands on one of the other person's pieces, you take it off the board and send it back to the beginning."
  6. "You are winning by getting al your pieces to the end and off the board."

    • Ошибка: Использование временного континуума и орфографическая ошибка в слове "all".
    • Исправление: "You win by getting all your pieces to the end and off the board."
  7. "Some people are preferring chess"

    • Ошибка: Глагол "prefer" не используется в продолженной форме.
    • Исправление: "Some people prefer chess."
  8. "but l am not understanding that game."

    • Ошибка: Глагол "understand" не используется в продолженной форме.
    • Исправление: "but I do not understand that game."
  9. "Right now, wait to have a game with my brother."

    • Ошибка: Нарушение структуры предложения и отсутствие подлежащего.
    • Исправление: "Right now, I am waiting to have a game with my brother."
  10. "He does his homework."

    • Ошибка: Это предложение не согласуется с предыдущей мыслью и нуждается в уточнении.
    • Исправление: "He is doing his homework."
  11. "I usually win, so think he doesn't want to play a game with me!"

    • Ошибка: Отсутствие подлежащего перед "think".
    • Исправление: "I usually win, so I think he doesn't want to play a game with me!"

После исправлений текст выглядит так:

"One game I love is backgammon. You throw the dice and then you move your pieces around the board. It seems quite easy, but in fact you need to be quite careful. When your piece lands on one of the other person's pieces, you take it off the board and send it back to the beginning. You win by getting all your pieces to the end and off the board. Some people prefer chess, but I do not understand that game. Right now, I am waiting to have a game with my brother. He is doing his homework. I usually win, so I think he doesn't want to play a game with me!"

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ответил 23 дня назад
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One game I love is backgammon. You throw the dice and move your pieces around the board. It may seem easy, but you need to be careful. When your piece lands on your opponent's piece, you take it off the board and send it back to the beginning. You win by getting all your pieces off the board. Some people prefer chess, but I don't understand that game. I am waiting to play a game with my brother. He is doing his homework. I usually win, so I think he doesn't want to play with me.

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ответил 23 дня назад

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